Thursday, February 13, 2014

CUTS FEB 13


Lines cut

 

First dance – after the swinging around movement, find a spot to stop and walk out before the chief begins.

 

WARREN
Well, here’s the Chief. super Chief
 
WILLIAMS
The
 
WARREN
Ol’ deef and dumb.  Don’t you know better?
 
WILLIAMS
Don’t you know keep to your room til that bell ring?  He scared like a baby
Bromden tries to slide away.

 

WARREN
Sweet thing, you want some help?
FLINN
I don’t need any.  Thank you.

 

BILLY
He’s duh…deaf and duh…dumb

?  Oh, give me the cards.

 

MCMURPHY,laughing
I may just have to pull her plug.
He continues dealing.She opens the window again.
RATCHED Step on Mac’s lines.
Group meeting.  Time for group meeting. 
Cue 8 bell after plug

 

BILLY disregarding Scanlon
I’m such a duh-disappointment to her, but she won’t admit it.  She won’t suh-see me like I am. And pretty soon, I want to kuh…kill myself.  So I try. Desperate, he looks as though he wants to cry. 

 

 

RATCHED
McMurphy, Randel Patrick. Committed by the state for diagnosis and possible treatment. Thirty-five years old.  Never married.  Distinguished service cross for leading an escape from a Communist prison camp. McMurphy is obviously embarrassed by this heroism.  A dishonorable discharge for insubordination, followed by a history of drunkenness, assault and battery, repeated gambling….
RATCHED
Our newest admission.
SPIVEY
You’ve no previous history? Any time spent in other institutions? 
MCMURPHY
No.  This is my first trip.  But I am crazy, Doc.   Here, let me show you…Repeated outbreaks of passion that suggest the possible diagnosis of psychopath.”
SPIVEY
I’m interested in this statement:” Don’t overlook the possibility that this man might be feigning psychosis to escape the drudgery of the work farm.” Well, Mr. McMurphy, What about that?
MCMURPHY with a maniacal grin:
Do I look like a sane man?  He laughs at himself with enjoyment.
RATCHED
Perhaps, Doctor, you should advise Mr. McMurphy on the protocol of these meetings.
SPIVEY
Patients must remain seated.  We operate on the principle of the Therapeutic community; this ward is a democratic society in miniature working to restore patients to the outside.  The important thing is not to let anything fester inside you.  Talk. Discuss. Confess. Write it down in the log for all to see.  Do you know what this procedure is called?

 

RATCHED
Mr. Harding stated that he was uneasy when walking with his wife because other men stared at her ample bosom. He further said quote.
HARDING flatly
She gives them reason to stare, unquote.
RATCHED
Yes. He has also been heard to say that he may give her reason to seek attention elsewhere.  What reason, Dale?
HARDING
Well, I can’t say that I have been notably ardent…
RATCHED
Do you mean inadequate?
CHESWICK
Maybe she’s just too hot for him.
BILLY out of malice from his previous hurt
 I buh bet he’s afraid of her.
HARDING
I’m not afraid.
MARTINI,
grinning
Okay, scared.
HARDING,
wringing his hands
Not afraid!  PAUSE It might be fair to say…intimidated.
HARDING
I see Mr. Harding has also stated that his wife’s ample bosom gives him a feeling of inferiority.
SCANLON
So why does he marry a dame with such big knockers to begin with?
HARDING
I wanted a womanly woman. One who would not compete, but who might help me to….
RATCHED, referring to notes
She has commented, Dale, that she finds you less than masculine.
MARTINI
How bout it, Harding”
 
McMurphy is standing apart as an outsider watching all this with growing incredulity.
 
RATCHED
To counteract certain tendencies within yourself? Would you say part of the problem is that she finds you less than masculine?
Without waiting for an answer. 
You chose a woman who was quite obviously your inferior.  Don’t you find significance in that?
 
HARDING, visibly embarrassed
Yes, of course, but I theorized……. It seemed to me…… Why… Why do I always cry? Harding begins to rock back and forth, weeping.
 

 

HARDING His talk speeds up, his hands dance and flutter; a wild puppet doing a high strung dance. 
Miss Ratched is a veritable angel of mercy… and … why, she has no life, nothing but her work and everybody knows it. 
Harding picks up a yellow ascot, playing with it and thinking at the same time.  McMurphy looks at him levelly.
Our Miss Ratched is the kindest, sweetest, most benevolent woman that I… that I….
He has to sit on his hands.
That I have….
He begins to laugh, then he is crying. I hate her…I hate her!
He says it with more conviction the second time and he ties the ascot around his throat. Bromden moves away from the group USR. He moves obtrusively DSR by the window
 

 

RATCHED
Then, what was the matter? PAUSE  What was the matter, Billy?
BILLY
I was in luh…luh…love with her. 
 

 

SPIVEY
I find Mr. McMurphy quite lucid, quite in touch and since he has exhibited no tendencies toward violence, I must conclude that electro-shock therapy is not indicated.

 

RATCHED
As I recall you refused to eat for three days until we allowed you to turn the set on at 6 instead of 6:30.

 

 

 

MCMURPHY
Are you bulling me?
No answer, but the men shift uneasily.  
Billy, you must be committed?
Billy shakes his head.
Then why?  You’re just a young kid.
They look down at the floor.
Why do you stay?  Ain’t you got any guts?

 

MCMURPHY
Planning to use them, Ma’am.  Plannin to scrub them urinals so clean we’re gona have to wear sunglasses every time we pee….

 

MCMURPHY
Yeah, when a town woman marries an Indian, that’s marryin beneath her, ain’t it?  And your papa had to take her name?
 

 

FLINN
Council meeting.  Patients’ council meeting.
 
 
 
SCANLON
A special meeting of the patients’ council.
 
RATCHED
Boys, I have given a great deal of thought to what I am about to say.  I believe there should be some form of punishment for your unspeakable behavior yesterday.
 
 
RATCHED
Most of you are here because you could not adjust to the outside world.  You broke the rules of society.  You wanted to be punished… needed it… but the punishment did not come. I realize it is difficult to enforce discipline in these surroundings.  However, we have decided to take away certain privileges.  First, for thirty days, there will be no television. 

 

RATCHED
No, Mr. Bromden was thought to be catatonic.We assumed that we could not communicate, so we gave up.  However, I have been disappointed to learn that he would conceal it from us.  Therefore, his first contribution to group therapy will be an apology.
 

 

 

Ratched
he's in the recovery room and will be back shortly. This gentleman, is a record of Mr. mcMurphy's gains in the short time  since he has been here on the ward. How much did you lose? Billy? Mr. Harding?
 
SPIVEY, shaking his head
not warranted except in cases of uncontrollable violence.  Shall we say there was a certain provocation in the last incident?  I do not approve surgical procedure in the absence of recurrent violence.
.
 
 

 

HARDING
I guess she means a lobotomy which is a castration of the brain.  Harding points to Ruckly.
They say he used to be a real rough character. 

 

MCMURPHY
Don’t worry, Boys, them windows will be open tonight.  So I can sashay right on out.  We make it a goin away party, huh. 

 

MCMURPHY
Well, let’s let her in.

 

SANDRA
This place is dangerous!
CUE 25 Filler  NO MUSIC

 

RATCHED, changing tactics
Billy, have you thought how your poor mother is going to take this?  You know what this is going to do to her.  You know, don’t you?

 

 

BROMDEN
Papa, They got to me again. They’re giving orders.  Go right.  Go left.  Do this.  Do that.  Where can I run?   Papa, there’s no place to hide no more.
 

 

HARDING, wearily
A loony told me McMurphy had sprouted wings and was last seen soaring in lazy circles overhead.
MARTINI, amazed
Honest?

 

CHESWICK
and that time that little nurse dropped a pill down the front of her uniform, and Mac tries to get it out, she hollers
SCANLON
Don’t touch me. I’m Catholic. They laugh harder as Harding enters from the dormitory.
BILLY as Harding unlocks the window
Look, McMuh….Muh….Mac, wait.
 
MCMURPHY
Don’t you mama Murphy me, Billy Boy.  It’s too late to back out now.
 
 

 

8 comments:

  1. People noises are getting better but we are still silent in some parts Hayden is always making some type of noise and interacting with everyone if we all matched his energy it would improve the show greatly

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  2. One part where I think the show loses energy is the scene with Mac and Chief with the nursery rhyme I know this is an important relationship building scene with them but it seemed kind of slow tonight

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  3. Reagan said we needed to be more stiff in the puppet dance I just youtubed how to dance like a puppet I watched the 3rd video and while we may not posses the dancing skills that this guy has he does a good job of showing where to be stiff and which joints move more

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  4. In the party scene when ratched comes in I don't think there's is a bigs enough reaction to being caught red handed by the woman that we fear

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  5. We need to work on the second dance a little more. It looks ok but people need to be more in sync with each other. like in the beginning slamming the chairs needs to be together and at the end when everyone drops. It doesn't look good when everyone is doing different things at the same time.

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  6. we still need people noise so we dont have dead silents moments. make up your own noise and do that for awhile till your line comes up. laugh and talk to a person that only you can see. there are many things you can do to have people noises so there are no dead zones.

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  7. I am glad that Austin and i have improved on the opening scene and setting the tone for the play. Rehersal went well but we need to remember what lines got cut.

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  8. People noises still need to be worked on. I think we need to find a way to build more tension leading up to the fight scene. There was and awkward pause waiting on Ratched to come back in after checking on Billy so we need to find a way to make that dress exchange faster.

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